personal essay

   

Imagine you were going to go on a vacation. You would normally like to go to somewhere nice and tropical. Florida and Cancun are some very tropical places. They have so many comparisons sons and differences.

          Florida is a nice place. It is very tropical and is very nice. It could sometimes be cold but it is normally nice. It is a very special and tropical place. When you are in a nice place you think about noting. It is nice beautiful and peaceful. What a great place to go. 
            Cancun is a wonderful place. It is peaceful and nice. When you go there it might be weird because you are in a different country but it is nice. You can lose yourself in the wonderfulness of the place. It is tropical just like Florida and other places but it is yet different.
          When you are looking for a great place to go on vacation you should go to a nice tropical pace. Cancun and Florida are two great places depending on the type of person you are. Cancun and Florida are very nice places. They have very few differences and are very similar.

"Musical"

 

Since I was six a lot of people call me Msical. I am a person that like's to play all sorts of music. I play that saxophone. the piano, a little violen, and some guitar. I play music because it is a beautiful soun. It can experss somone. Music express me because it shows poeple who I really am.

This is where I feel that i belong, playing music and doing it good. Jazz is a beautiful sound that people can relate to because to me it tells a story. when people walk up to me and I am playing they say that I have a really special talent. I always listen to people and i work my hardest. Music is what I am it is what describes me and that is what I think I am. There are many sides to me and music can discribe all of them.

project

Jared Gray             Board Room Essay

1/10/12

Period 4-5

     Hi I’m Jared Gray and I want to talk to you about putting the commercial of my product, “The Gum Pencil,” on after the 3 o’clock news. The Gum Pencil is a top of the market pencil. It is better than any other pencil including the Tootsie Roll Pen, and the Music Pen. One reason that you should put my products commercial is that it has a taste like no other. It isn’t fattening or bad for you. For people who like to write it writes as smooth as a pen and for those who don’t it makes writing tolerable.

     The gum pencil has an extraordinary taste. A normal pack of gum can’t compare. The Tootsie Roll Pen tastes like bees wax and makes your project sticky. The Gum Pen lasts for your longest essay or project instead of 2 or 3 normal pieces of Juicy Fruit. It doesn’t leave a terrible after taste. Even when you spit out our gum the flavor locks inside your mouth for another half hour. Our taste is great which will keep candy eaters coming.

     Our gum is not fattening unlike other products such as the TRP which we tested and it was horrible. The only thing a boy ate for the whole day was a TRP and he gained 2 grams. Our gum actually has no sodium at all. Gum which has been proven to help you think is nothing compared to my product which increases learning speed, like little Timmy here he had a C- on his report card and when he got 4 double packs his grad went up to all As. And just for kids parents who don’t want them to have a sugar it is absolutely sugar free. So for those who like taste and want it to last for a long time this is the pencil for you.

     The Gum Pencil is the smoothest thing around. I mean pens are smooth but the, “music pen,” is just a distraction to work. You could be doing an essay and it can start playing scaring you and messing up your project. My pencil is as smooth as a ball point pen and it comes with 5 pieces of lead. It also has the best grip in the world for writing long essays. So if you have sweaty hands and want smooth writing get this.

     When we put our product in stores they were sold out the next day. Now imagine it in a commercial it would be haywire. You get to munch on something after lunch, you’ll have great smooth writing and you won’t gain any weight. If you want to be a part of the success of this product then you will show this commercial.